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Honestly ,i am not a native english speaker,so that's why i ask all of yours for help.I am going to invite all of our customers to attend our trade fair which will be held at Spoga center ,Cologue. here is the invitation letter was written by myself. It has been a while since our last contaction,I would like to know what is your impression of our products? do you have any special requests for our products? Any comments by return will be much appreciated. Besides,After having a sucessful trade show in Las Vegas, I am glad to inform you that we will be participating in the fair which will be held at Spoga,cologue,Germary. here is the information: Location:Spoga+gafa,Cologue,Germary Date:Aug 31 ~Sep 2, 2008 Our booth No: xxxxxx we warmly welcome you pay a visit to our booth during this time. all of new our products will be shown there. Look forward to meeting you at Spoga show. please express above sentence in anther way.just keep the same idea.Many thanks
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- sorry what is the question? if u want 2 indorse a product then u should tell people about beneifts and what u would get if u didnt have the product thats all i can help with until i know what u want sorry
- It has been a while since our last contact, I would appreciate it if you let me know what your impression of the products was. Do you have any special requests for our products? Any comments in return will be much appreciated. Also, after having a sucessful trade show in Las Vegas, I am glad to inform you that we will be participating in the fair which will be held at Spoga,cologue,Germary. here is the information: Location:Spoga+gafa,Cologue,Germary Date:Aug 31 ~Sep 2, 2008 Our booth No: xxxxxx After being greeted with a warm welcome, you will then pay a visit to our booth during this time. all of our new our products will be shown there. I am looking forward to meeting you there! please express above sentence in another way.just keep the same idea. Thank you very much.
- It's been a while since we contacted you and now wish to get some feedback regarding our poducts. Please use this form, or a separate sheet of paper to tell us how we can improve our products and services to please you better. On 31st August 2008 until 2nd September we will be exhibiting at a trade fair at SPOGA, COLOGUE, GERMANY following a very succesful exhibition in Las Vegas recently. There will be a new product launch and lots of things to see. You are cordially invited to join us as one of our loyal customers, our booth number is: xxxxxx We look forward to meeting you. Tel: 001 123456 Fax: 001 123456 email: blablabla@woteva.com website: www.blablabla@woteva.com
- It has been a while since our last contact. I would like to know your impression of our products? Do you have any special requests for our products? Any comments you provide will be much appreciated. After having a successful trade show in Las Vegas, I am glad to inform you that we will be participating in the fair which will be held at Spoga, Cologne, Germany. Here is the information: Location:Spoga+gafa, Cologne, Germany Date:Aug 31 ~Sep 2, 2008 Our booth No: xxxxxx We warmly welcome you to pay a visit to our booth during this time. All of our new products will be shown there. I look forward to meeting you at the Spoga show.
- Instead of contaction, just use contact, or communication. Contaction is not a word. I would like to know what your impression is of our products. I would also like to hear about any special requests regarding our products. Any comments will be greatly appreciated. A warm welcome awaits you when you visit our booth during this time. All of our new products will be shown there. I am looking forward to seeing you at Spoga show. Good Luck with your show.. Hope this helped.
- It has been a while since our last contact and I would be interested in your impression of our products? Do you have any special requests, or suggestions for our products? Any comments by return will be much appreciated. After having a successful trade show in Las Vegas, I am glad to inform you that we will be participating in the fair which will be held at Spoga,Cologne,Germany. Show details as follow: Location:Spoga+gafa,Cologne,Germany Date:Aug 31 ~Sep 2, 2008 Our booth No: xxxxxx We invite you pay a visit to our booth during this time where all of new our products will be on show. Look forward to meeting you at Spoga Show (The link below is for Hotel booking for the Show)
- INVITATION TO TRADE FAIR SPOGA,COLOGNE,GERMANY. As a valued customer our Company cordially invites you to the Trade Fair which is being held in Spoga, Cologne, Germany. Which is being held on the 31st August to 2nd Sept.Our Booth number is:XXXXX After much success our Company had at the Las Vegas Trade Fair, we extend a warm welcome to you when you vist our stand, and shall be extremely pleased to note your thoughts on our products. We look forward to seeing you there. Location:Spoga+gafa,Cologne,Germany Date:Aug 31st~Sept 2nd 2008 Our booth No: xxxxxx
- It has been a while since we last met, I would very much appreciate some feedback on our products. Do you have any special requests? Please send your thoughts by return mail, and again, thank you. Our participation in the trade show in Las Vegas was a great success, so we are pleased to inform you that we are attending one at Spoga, (Cologne, Germany). Here are the details: Location: Spoga+gafa,Cologne,Germary Date: Aug 31 ~Sep 2, 2008 Our booth: No: xxxxxx You are cordially invited to visit us at the trade show. All our new products will be on display. See you there!
- I suggest that you use Purplemoon0101's answer. It is short and direct to the point while giving all the information needed by the reader. Business letters should be treated as such.
- It has been a while since our last correspondence; I would like to know what your impression of our products is? Do you have any special requests for our products? Any comments by return will be much appreciated. After having a successful trade show in Las Vegas, I am glad to inform you that we will be participating in the fair, which will be held at Spoga, Cologne, Germany. Location: Spoga + gafa, Cologne, Germany Date: Aug 31 ~Sep 2, 2008 Our booth No: xxxxxx We warmly welcome you pay a visit to our booth during this time. All of our new products will be shown there. Look forward to meeting you at the Spoga show.
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